Loại: Line graph đơn
Thời: Quá khứ (1983-1992)
Chủ ngữ: the number of cases of X disease/ the number of people affected by X disease/the number of people falling victims to X disease
Xu hướngchung (mở bài): Bài này khó thấy xu hướng chung nên có thể chọn 1 diễn biến (nổi bật hơn các diễn biến khác) vào làm xu hướng chung, ví dụ: since 1992 the country was clear of x disease
Các xuhướng nhỏ (thân bài):
- 83: started at
- 83-84: remained stable
- 84-85: slightly increased
- 85-87: continued to increase but more steeply
- 87-88: fell insignificantly
- 88-89: surged, reached a peak at
- 90-91: levelled out
- 91-92: plummetted to zero
Ngữ pháp: Có các cấu trúc S + V + adv; hay there be + adj + N; haywitness/suffer/go through cả bị động chủ động; before, after, followed by. Cứ nhóm 2 đến 3 diễn biến trên vào 1 câu. Thân bài khoảng 6 câu là đẹp.
The linegraph demonstrates the number of people falling victims to X disease in thecountry of Someland from 1983 to 1992. It can be seen from the graph that, in 1992 there was no case of X disease reported in Someland.
Starting relatively low at 100 cases in 1983, the number remained unchanged in the following year before going up a little in 1985 to just above 100. In 1986 and 1987, the number continued to increase but more steeply to 200 cases. The year of 1988 witnessed a dramatic drop by 100 cases, followed by a surge before the number reached a peak at 400 in 1989. In 1990, a slightly smaller number of 350 people were affected by X disease. After that, the number levelled out then suddenly plummetted to zero in the last year of the period. The country was clear of the disease since 1992.
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