- Viết Introduction (chú ý paraphrase lại)
- Viết overview (nêu 2 đặc điểm chung của biểu đồ)
- Mô tả các sự thay đổi và quyết định xem nhóm thông tin vào 2 khổ thế nào ?
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Thì:
- Nếu có 1 bản đồ trong quá khứ và 1 bản đồ ở hiện tại: dùng quá khứ đơn hoặc quá khứ hoàn thành
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Mở bài
Viết lại đề bài
Overview
Nêu 2 đặc điểm tổng quát.
- Chẳng hạn như có thêm shopping center, super market, golf course => more options for shopping and leisure activities.
- Cây bị chặt, bãi sông thành khu dân cư => cutting out some of the natural beauty while extending the residential area.
Thân bài
Nhóm thông tin thành 2 khổ, Nếu trong bản đồ có con đường dài hoặc sông dài cắt ngang bản đồ thành 2 phẩn thì chia 2 đoạn tương ứng với 2 bên của con sông hoặc đường. Nếu không có thì đơn giản chia bản đồ thành 2 phần bằng nhau, mô tả từ bắc xuống nam hoặc đông sang tây.
1. Ví dụ 1
The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Mở bài
Đề bài: The maps below show how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007
Viết lại: The maps illustrate the transformation of a town called Harborne between 1936 and 2007.
Overview:
Overall, the town became more developed, cutting out some of the natural beauty while extending the residential area and providing more options for shopping and leisure activities
Thân bài:
Nhóm thành 2 đoạn và mô tả từ bắc xuống nam
From 1936 to 2007, the area around the river was developed into a residential area in the northeastern part of the city. The number of trees located in the northwest dropped significantly in the 71 year period.
In the center of the town, they built a new shopping centre and the post office, bank and library remained. The sweet shop and butchers were replaced with a supermarket. Across from the post office, a travel agency was built right on the site where the flower shop used to be. The bike path in the southwest was redesigned as a road. In the southeast, the government offices were converted into a museum, and the adjacent farmland was turned into a golf course.
2. Ví dụ 2
Bài mẫu khác của VD trên. Trong đó mô tả từ bắc xuống nam với việc để riêng khu trung tâm thành 1 khổ,
The maps illustrate the changes of a town called Harborne between 1936 and 2007.
Overall, over the period shown Harborne became more developed with a totally new extended residential area and far more places for shopping and recreation. However, the town had fewer green areas in 2007 than it used to be in 1936.
From 1936 to 2007, a new residential area was formed along the river in the north eastern part of the city, and the crooked cycle path in the south west was reconstructed to become a curved road. However, 2 trees in the north west were cut down over the same period. In the south east the government offices were converted into a museum, and the farmland next to it to the right was transformed into a golf course.
In the center of the town, over the period shown, a totally new shopping center was built while the post office, bank and library stayed unchanged. The sweet shop and butchers were replaced by a supermarket, and to the left of the bank was a new travel agency which was erected right on the area where the flower shop used to be in 1936.
3. Ví dụ 3
The maps bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the begining of the 21st century. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Bài này sẽ nhóm thân bài bằng cách chia 2 khổ theo 2 bên con sông
The two maps show how the town of Lakeside developed over a ten-year period from 2000 to 2009.
It is clear that the town changed considerably over the period shown, with the disappearance of some residential areas and the expansion of the industrial complex as well as other service areas.
In the north of the river, the derelict warehouse and old town were knocked down, which were replaced by a car park, offices and a new university in the latter year. Multi-screen cinema was built on the site of the old arts center in the west of the town, and the school was converted into newer schools. The only part of Lakeside that remained unchanged was the large residential area situated in the northeast of the town.
In the south of the river, the most striking change was the disappearance of the residential area which was demolished to make way for an extension of the industrial complex. In contrast, the lake became a small pond in 2009.
4. Ví dụ 4
Cách viết khác của ví dụ 3
The two maps show how the town of Lakeside developed over a ten-year period from 2000 to 2009.
Overall, over the period shown Lakeside became more developed and industrialized with less natural beauty but far more places for shopping, studying and relaxation.
The most striking change is that in the south east of the town, the old industrial complex was combined with a small residential area and a part of the woodland to become a much larger industrial complex. However, on the opposite side of the town to the north west, a large residential area remained over the period shown.
In 2009, there were no longer derelict warehouses and old town in the north of the town but a new car park and offices that were newly constructed. Another interesting point is that the arts center and residential area in the west of the town were converted into a multi-screen cinema and shopping center respectively. Over the same period, more schools and universities were built on the site where old school and part of the green land used to be. A big lake that the river originates from dwindled to a small pond.
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