Các câu hỏi dạng Discussion + Opinion:
- Discuss both views and give your opinion
- Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion
Hướng giải:
Phân thân bài thành 2 khổ tương ứng với câu hỏi đề bài. Điểm khác biệt quan trọng so với dạng Discuss là ở đây phải thể hiện quan điểm bản thân vào trong bài
Sự khác nhau giữa balanced opinion và discuss both views and give your opinion:
- Balanced opinion: both views are YOUR views -> you shouldn't talk about "some people" or "other people“
- Discuss both views and give your opinion: you can talk about "some people's/other people's" views
Dàn bài chung
Cách tiếp cận 1
Mở bài
- Câu thứ nhất: giới thiệu chủ đề của đề bài một cách ngắn gọn (bằng cách paraphrase lại câu của đề bài)
- Câu thứ hai: đề cập đến cả 2 quan điểm và đưa ra quan điểm của bạn (ví dụ bạn theo quan điểm 2)
Thân bài
- Nêu các ý hỗ trợ cho quan điểm 1. Ở đoạn này bạn nên nói về Advantages của ý kiến mình không chọn. Tuy nhiên, vẫn phải nhìn nhận vấn đề khách quan và nên dùng hiệu quả Impersonal Language ở đoạn này.
- Nêu các ý hỗ trợ cho quan điểm 2 (thể hiện rõ ràng là bạn ủng hộ quan điểm này). Bạn nên tập trung bàn luận ý kiến này hơn ý kiến ở paragraph 1 vì đây là ý kiến bạn ủng hộ. Bảo vệ ý kiến của mình ở đoạn gần kết bài thì sẽ dẫn đến kết bài tự nhiên hơn.
Kết luận: Tóm tắt cả 2 quan điểm và ý kiến của của bạn
Cách tiếp cận 2
Dàn bài làm giống như trong dạng discussion, nêu bật ký kiến cá nhân ở trong phần kết luận. Không nêu quan điểm cá nhân trong phần mở bài.Ví dụ 1 (cách tiếp cận 1)
Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Dàn bài:
Mở bài:
- Viết lại câu của đề bài bằng cách paraphrase các từ khóa của bài
- Trả lời câu hỏi của đề bài. Đề bài nêu câu hỏi thảo luận 2 quan điểm: sống ở thành phồ nhiều nhà cao tầng hay là thành phố với nhiều nhà thấp tầng và hỏi quan điểm mình theo ý nào -> Mình theo ý sống ở thành phố với nhiều nhà cao tầng
Thân bài 1: Nêu những lý do tại sao nên sống ở thành phố với nhà thấp tầng
- people have to pay less for building services
- living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur
Thân bài 2: Nêu những lợi ích của việc sống ở thành phố với nhà cao tầng (mình sẽ theo quan
điểm này)
- A city with skyscrapers will have more space for public usage
- A wide range of goods and services
Kết luận: nhắc lại ý nêu ra ở câu thứ 2 phần mở bài
Bài mẫu:
Some people believe that living in a horizontal city is the best, while the opponents of this idea prefer to settle in a vertical city. While there are benefits to residents who dwell in a city which consists of low-rise construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more
advantages.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for residents to live in a horizontal city based on a few financial and security reasons. Firstly, people have to pay less for building services. If residents settle in a private house, they may save a great deal of money since they will not have to pay for building services. Secondly, living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur. For example, if a fire starts in the home, they can quickly escape from the dangerous areas because the building is not too high off the ground and it will not take much time to leave.
On the other hand, it seems to me that living in a vertical city is the best choice. A city with skyscrapers will have more space for public usage because there will be less land used for residential areas due to the amount of people who can live in high buildings. As a result, the government would be able to use this land to build hospitals, schools or places for entertainment. Furthermore, it is much more convenient for residents to live in an apartment in a tall building which offers a wide range of goods and services, thanks to shopping malls and service centers on lower floors.
In conclusion, while living in a horizontal city does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of life in a city with skyscrapers makes living in a vertical city the better choice.
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, more and more people are making the choice to go to university. While some people are of the opinion that the only purpose of a university education is to improve job prospects, others think that society and the individual benefit in much broader ways.(Very clear thesis)
It is certainly true that one of the main aims of university is to secure a better job. The majority of people want to improve their future career prospects and attending university is one of the best ways to do this as it increases a person’s marketable skills and attractiveness to potential employers./ In addition, further education is very expensive for many people, so most would not consider it if it would not provide them with a more secure future and a higher standard of living. Thus, job prospects are very important.
However, there are other benefits for individuals and society. Firstly, the independence of living away from home is a benefit because it helps the students develop better social skills and improve as a person. A case in point is that many students will have to leave their families, live in halls of residence and meet new friends. As a result, their maturity and confidence will grow enabling them to live more fulfilling lives./ Secondly, society will gain from the contribution that the graduates can make to the economy. We are living in a very competitive world, so countries need educated people in order to compete and prosper.
Therefore, I believe that although a main aim of university education is to get the best job, there are clearly further benefits. If we continue to promote and encourage university attendance, it will lead to a better future for individuals and society.
Ví dụ 2 (cách tiếp cận 1)
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.
Ví dụ 3 (cách tiếp cận 2)
Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, more and more people are making the choice to go to university. While some people are of the opinion that the only purpose of a university education is to improve job prospects, others think that society and the individual benefit in much broader ways.(Very clear thesis)
It is certainly true that one of the main aims of university is to secure a better job. The majority of people want to improve their future career prospects and attending university is one of the best ways to do this as it increases a person’s marketable skills and attractiveness to potential employers./ In addition, further education is very expensive for many people, so most would not consider it if it would not provide them with a more secure future and a higher standard of living. Thus, job prospects are very important.
However, there are other benefits for individuals and society. Firstly, the independence of living away from home is a benefit because it helps the students develop better social skills and improve as a person. A case in point is that many students will have to leave their families, live in halls of residence and meet new friends. As a result, their maturity and confidence will grow enabling them to live more fulfilling lives./ Secondly, society will gain from the contribution that the graduates can make to the economy. We are living in a very competitive world, so countries need educated people in order to compete and prosper.
Therefore, I believe that although a main aim of university education is to get the best job, there are clearly further benefits. If we continue to promote and encourage university attendance, it will lead to a better future for individuals and society.
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